Matt Bellamy

Hey! I think this was indeed a bit short and you could make it better by fleshing it out a bit. I think the main thing is that you don't ...

Aww! Your poem made me feel sorry for the peacock, so I suppose you have set out what you intended to do, well done! I like your writing style and ...

This is awesome. Seriously. I love your writing style and your description is beautiful. You opened with some great imagery and developed your characters well considering how short the piece ...

Hey! I like this. :) I have a couple of nitpicks though. I think you could use a better word than "scary", when you say the world's a scary place. ...

I know you wanted this to be picked apart but I honestly can't find anything to complain about. I really like what I assume is the chorus, with the Northern ...

I really liked this poem. Yeah, it was long, but if it hadn't held my attention I wouldn't have read it all, let alone reviewed it! So well done for ...

I like how simple this poem is, and I don't think you have to be religious to appreciate the idea behind it. I think it's very inspirational, and I'd go ...

I'd agree that you need to work on your grammar; the grammar check on Microsoft Word is probably helpful to check through your work if you have it. Apart from ...

Hey! I'm going to start by saying I really like this line: "in my glossy eyes", because it makes the narrator sound like he is a bit staring, sort of ...

I like how you used repetition in this piece, I think it sounds really good. The narrator sounds like a really cold person 9well I suppose you would be, if ...

Oh! That was basically my reaction when I got to the end of the poem. I like how you lead the reader on and don't give any hint of what ...

Haha, this is pretty cool. It made me laugh, it's pleasingly short for my short attention span, and it makes a change from sad or serious poetry. I bet you ...

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So did I!

Aww, this is really cute. I can't actually remember the last time I read a poem that was written from the point of view of an animal. It's pretty amusing ...